Story and Feedback

Sorry for the long post, but I have been working on a story dealing with some of the issues that the people in the favelas are facing in Rio de Janeiro for the past month or so. I want to show the violence and grit of the place, but also, normal everyday life, and create photographs that go beyond the literal. I thought that this would be a good place to post a work in progress and see if you guys had any comments or suggestions.
Matthew Williams